I wasn’t sure what was in the box, but I knew it wasn’t good. Ever since my husband Harold bought the suspicious box from Zeena Lavey it has been cursing my life. I’m not even kidding! I keep having reoccurring dreams of my sons being taken from the demon on the box. ZoZo was the demon’s name. ZoZo is evil. He has a big history of possession. It doesn't help that the previous owner of the box was the high priestess of The Church Of Satanism. This was only contributing to my constant state of terror. If anything else happened I was going to need a priest!
I like your use of different sentence types and sentence lengths. The words you've used makes me want to read more of your story. Well done!
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